Wednesday, April 24, 2013

The Table in the Restaurant

The man and the woman sat diagonally from each other at a small table in the crowded Japanese restaurant.

In silence.

They were scrutinizing their menus as if the secrets of the universe were inscribed on the pages.

The waiter arrived.

"Can I get you anything to drink?" he asked.

"Just water," said the man.

"Just water for me too, and I think we're ready to order," said the woman.

The waiter took out his pad, clicked open his pen.

"Actually, can you hold that order for a second? I have to hit the restroom," said the man, abruptly standing up from his chair.

"I can just go get your water and come right back," said the waiter.

"Don't worry about the water yet, I'll be back in a second," said the man.

And off he went, leaving the woman to wait.

Thirty seconds later he returned. The waiter was still standing there.

"Actually, I have a work emergency and I need to leave, but you should feel free to stay," said the man to the woman.

He grabbed his jacket and hurried off without so much as an apology or a backwards glance.

The woman sat, eyes wide, face pale.

She stared after him, biting her lip and clutching her iPhone for dear life.

"Are you going to stay?" asked the waiter.

She looked at him blankly.

He stood, waiting, his eyes kind.

"Oh, well, no I guess not," said the woman.

She pushed back her chair and stood slowly, put on her jacket, and left the restaurant, blending seamlessly into the stream of midtown commuters, making their way home.

I watched this scene play out last night at the table next to me at a 
restaurant in Times Square, and have been thinking about it ever since, 
and wondering about their story


  1. Blind date I think? Cruel of him regardless.

  2. Seriously?!! What the heck happened and aren't we glad not to be there at this point!

  3. Wow! That's no fun for that lady. I'd be thinking about them too.

  4. That sounds like a date and the guy wasn't happy with her reality. Superficial meany.

  5. I love the mood you set here. The best writers are great observers. Like you.

  6. I love the tension and the vulnerability of this story. What a wonderful observation. I wish we knew their ending, too.