Monday, March 31, 2014

Starry Sky. Endless Summer.



They lay in the open field, staring into the starry sky.

He wonders if he should. She wonders if he will.

His hand inches over, covers hers.

She smiles. Moves closer.

They are young, wild, free. And summer will never be over.


19 comments:

  1. I like the line in which first he wonders and then she does.

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  2. So romantic. I needed a little splash of romance to my day. :)

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  3. Someday, you totally have to write a romance novel.

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  4. This is so sweet - the nervousness and anticipation comes through well!

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  5. Male confession, when he wonders if he should I wasn't thinking about hands. ;) I liked this.

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  6. Oh, how sweet! Dang, it makes me remember high school. :) Thanks so much for gargleblasting with us - hope you had fun!

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  7. Beautiful! You seemed to fit so much in without having to cram. I actually counted your words! Great job!

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  8. Aw, this is so lovely! Brings me right back to those endless summer days. Fabulous take on the prompt! :)

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  9. So sweet. Unfortunately, Summer does end, but until then...

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