Monday, March 31, 2014

Starry Sky. Endless Summer.



They lay in the open field, staring into the starry sky.

He wonders if he should. She wonders if he will.

His hand inches over, covers hers.

She smiles. Moves closer.

They are young, wild, free. And summer will never be over.


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18 comments:

  1. www.icescreammama.comMarch 31, 2014 at 9:46 AM

    sweet. :)

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  2. StacieMarch 31, 2014 at 1:49 PM

    Aw, very romantic!

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  3. Whispering ThoughtsMarch 31, 2014 at 2:15 PM

    Lovely

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  4. AnonymousMarch 31, 2014 at 2:59 PM

    I like the line in which first he wonders and then she does.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 31, 2014 at 3:47 PM

    sweet and romantic!

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  6. Erica MMarch 31, 2014 at 4:50 PM

    Aw.

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  7. sueMarch 31, 2014 at 6:38 PM

    I enjoyed that!

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  8. Natalie DeYoungMarch 31, 2014 at 7:44 PM

    So romantic. I needed a little splash of romance to my day. :)

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  9. Jen BrunettMarch 31, 2014 at 9:59 PM

    awwww amore!

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  10. LarksApril 1, 2014 at 12:01 AM

    Someday, you totally have to write a romance novel.

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  11. JannaTWritesApril 1, 2014 at 12:07 AM

    This is so sweet - the nervousness and anticipation comes through well!

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  12. Christi @ EditMoiApril 1, 2014 at 1:38 PM

    Been there. Great job!

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  13. Jack SteinerApril 1, 2014 at 2:44 PM

    Male confession, when he wonders if he should I wasn't thinking about hands. ;) I liked this.

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  14. AnonymousApril 1, 2014 at 8:18 PM

    Oh, how sweet! Dang, it makes me remember high school. :) Thanks so much for gargleblasting with us - hope you had fun!

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  15. AnonymousApril 2, 2014 at 4:50 AM

    Beautiful! You seemed to fit so much in without having to cram. I actually counted your words! Great job!

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  16. SuzanneApril 2, 2014 at 8:36 AM

    Aw, this is so lovely! Brings me right back to those endless summer days. Fabulous take on the prompt! :)

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  17. Ben JacksonApril 2, 2014 at 9:19 AM

    I just love your writing, Sam!

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  18. tedstrutzApril 5, 2014 at 2:26 PM

    So sweet. Unfortunately, Summer does end, but until then...

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